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There were stars in her eyes on that night
The captured moon grasped tight in her hand
She was a goddess to see only hindsight
And I was to deaf to give into her commands

(I cant believe I let her fall from grace)

I hear them label me a liar
And I cannot forget it.
Wordless mocking in their eyes
My heart told as venomous
I try so hard to catch my breath
I don't let them ever see me cry.
I lost a love tonight.
Voices screaming inside my mind.
(YOU LET HER DIE!)

There was rain beating down on us that night
We lept with joy under the liquid promise of better days
Dancing under a luminous sky lit so bright
We dreamt of a love that never stays

( I can't believe I let her slip away from me...)

I hear them label me a liar
And I cannot forget it.
Wordless mocking in their eyes
My heart told as venomous
I try so hard to catch my breath
I don't let them ever see me cry.
I lost a love tonight.
Voices screaming inside my mind.
(YOU LET HER DIE!)

I ran from the shadows
And out to her grave
A falling crystal
Meant to be saved
Now my hearts breaking
Before I was stronger
She was so fragile
And I could have stopped her...

Pulseless- nothingness
She lies dead within her soul
He drown her
I let her
Fall into his death pull
And I let her...
fall away from me.

I hear them label me a liar
And I cannot forget it.
Wordless mocking in their eyes
My heart told as venomous
I try so hard to catch my breath
I don't let them ever see me cry.
I lost a love tonight.
Voices screaming inside my mind.
(YOU LET THE STARS FALL FROM THE SKY)
©2005-2009 ~Luminesca
:iconluminesca:

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this is a bit older. i can't really say much about it. or want to that is. Harsh reality, ya know?

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:iconcatscradler:
hrm

well i love it

actually it's dreamt, but a minor detail

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Hear me rant: [link]
Ostrobogulous on Saturdays from 8-10pm
:iconsalvationforsanity:
This is stunning. Beautiful job. Thank you for sharing this.

:+favlove:

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
:iconluminesca:
^_^;; holy chunk. i just noticed that. heh. i'll change that... -feels retarded- t/y ^_^

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'Cause you can't jump the track,we're like cars on a cable
and life's like an hourglass, glued to the table
No one can find the rewind button girl,
So cradle your head in you hands

~Anna Nalick
:iconcatscradler:
dont feel dumb, im the one who pounces on grammatical errors with the wrath of God. I always read the poetry and prose in recent deviations. All this in hope that I'll be able to correct an error. lol

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Hear me rant: [link]
Ostrobogulous on Saturdays from 8-10pm
:iconluminesca:
T/y for comment/fav ^_^

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'Cause you can't jump the track,we're like cars on a cable
and life's like an hourglass, glued to the table
No one can find the rewind button girl,
So cradle your head in you hands

~Anna Nalick
:iconsalvationforsanity:
Welcome. My pleasure!

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
:iconpleasantlyinsane:
This is amazing. Truly. I loved reading this. You really placed the words so gracefully, it made the poem so good.

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You try my shoes on for a change, they look so good but fit so strange.
No Doubt
Member of ~burn-p0etry
:iconluminesca:
T/y ^_^

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'Cause you can't jump the track,we're like cars on a cable
and life's like an hourglass, glued to the table
No one can find the rewind button girl,
So cradle your head in you hands

~Anna Nalick

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